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Author:  nestor_d [ June 11th, 2022, 7:54 pm ]
Post subject:  South Atlantic A-103/M (Possible start of vaguely thought-out AU)
First attempt at FD drawing. Any and all comments much appreciated
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Author:  eswube [ June 11th, 2022, 9:06 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: South Atlantic A-103/M (Possible start of vaguely thought-out AU)
Sadly, to begin with, the template is extremely oversized (mis-scaled)...

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As a result, the drawing itself is also oversized (mis-scaled) and it also suffers from number of other issues (drawing-wise - leaving the design issues aside) like heavy corners, anti-aliasing, artifact, excessive amount of shades... :(
Author:  nestor_d [ June 12th, 2022, 7:08 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: South Atlantic A-103/M (Possible start of vaguely thought-out AU)
Alright, second attempt
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Author:  eswube [ June 12th, 2022, 7:39 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: South Atlantic A-103/M (Possible start of vaguely thought-out AU)
Oh my...
Before we go anywhere else... one thing to begin with:
see the difference? (it applies to ALL of Your drawing)
(note that black used for contour is NOT the same as black used for "paint")

(left - as is, right - as should be)
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Next thing - the 15-7 marking on plan view: it is left in blurry multiple-shade format - in FD it's possible to use as little as 4 shades of any given color (though I use 5-6 - but 1-2 of them in minimal amount). (and in fact Your work is completely lacking any shading at all)

And here's the (oversized) example of shading: (gradation from brightest to darkest: yellow - orange - red - maroon - purple)

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